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https://youtu.be/s_C_3nWTrFY

https://youtu.be/s_C_3nWTrFY i put some of images for your products in the wall . if you want changes of the camera moving to focus on them , i will do that . If there is something you don't like, or would like to see different, please let me know.

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  • rasfaree
    竞赛主办者
    • 6 年 之前

    last animation scene it should read - "THE HEART OF OCCASIONS"

    • 6 年 之前
    1. amooory2008
      amooory2008
      • 6 年 之前

      about spelling Sorry , i just now noticed that , i will work on this changes , and upload again shoortly ,

      • 6 年 之前
    2. amooory2008
      amooory2008
      • 6 年 之前

      updating video https://youtu.be/Z5aNShJxL-E

      • 6 年 之前
  • amooory2008
    amooory2008
    • 6 年 之前

    the video after changes https://youtu.be/KBa_Y1xhF9U , i make "THE HEART OF OCCASIONS" read easily , also the last transition become more smoother , i hope you like it , still we can do any changes

    • 6 年 之前
    1. rasfaree
      竞赛主办者
      • 6 年 之前

      u need to correct the spelling mistake on "the heart of occasion" from your line it reads "heat"instead of heart. also try changing back the wall colour to red theme and fonts on the wall to Arial or Century Gothic type fonts. It doesnt need to be these fonts.

      • 6 年 之前
  • amooory2008
    amooory2008
    • 6 年 之前

    also i make a sample video to display your products https://youtu.be/LLrrVjrkE20 , it is just a sample , we can add more products , if you want

    • 6 年 之前
    1. rasfaree
      竞赛主办者
      • 6 年 之前

      not good

      • 6 年 之前
  • amooory2008
    amooory2008
    • 6 年 之前

    i will work on the changes you want ,

    • 6 年 之前
  • amooory2008
    amooory2008
    • 6 年 之前

    you said you want a creative Ad , its So easy to make a video Display your products

    • 6 年 之前
  • amooory2008
    amooory2008
    • 6 年 之前

    https://youtu.be/SlQ-z2kXlL8 i hope i doing the changes as you want , if you want other changes , please let me know

    • 6 年 之前
    1. rasfaree
      竞赛主办者
      • 6 年 之前

      last animation scene it should read - "THE HEART OF OCCASIONS", the ending seems bit rough. not very smooth. after seeing the last submitted video, i must say you need further improvement as that video displays the products more.

      • 6 年 之前
  • rasfaree
    竞赛主办者
    • 6 年 之前

    the last animated scene background colour needs to be green similar to logo heart colour.

    • 6 年 之前

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