Wow this is really fun. One of my favorites for sure!!! A couple of nitpicks.
- Don't add "dave Scott" to the logo. The logo should just be "Evil Genius" or "Evil Genius presents"
- Try a different font for Dave Scott in the slider. This one looks Asian more than anything
- This has a slider? What other images are in the slider?
- Somehow try to incorporate all my copy in there.