I have a script to edit.
- 状态: Pending
- 奖金: $79
- 参赛作品已收到: 3
Minor presentation and phrasing issues also play a negative role.
There only occasionally errors, typos or some awkward turns of phrasing that
could be fixed.
Check to be sure you are only using the present tense when describing action
(see pg 35 for examples of past tense use).
There are many talking, repetitive scenes in the third act. You’ll want to avoid
repetition and trim dialogue.
I have marked all the feedback, and you can see the feedback questions then.
The price is $79. The best time is before 23 o 'clock on May 15th. I use it in two competitions。
Script modification requirements:
[login to view URL] the script according to the bright yellow mark on the script feedback.
2. Revise according to the blue line in the script feedback.
3. Complete at least one manuscript by 23:00 on May 15; The second draft is completed on the 19th.
[login to view URL] the work if the modification meets the requirements; If not, go ahead.
5. Edit with Final Dra software.
6. The last is the successful screenwriter.