Lauren G. Foster

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  Hariiken

  • 4 年 之前

  You should had wait for the last moment. I designed attractive pages . to see the design pls visit my profile.

  • 4 年 之前
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  竞赛主办者

  • 4 年 之前

  Ok, I deleted the word document with the text and added a new version that should be much clearer. This will be several pages. 2 pages for the story, 1 page each for all of the steps and a final congratulations page. There can be a title page also. I like the style and look of #2 and #7 best. Happy and light but with rich use of color. Please ask me specific questions so that I can better give you support and feedback. Thanks so much for your help with this project!

  • 4 年 之前
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     Hariiken

     • 4 年 之前

     Thanks for choosing my entry #7 . Pls let me know is it only two pages or more ? I am working on your project.

     • 4 年 之前
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  Hariiken

  • 4 年 之前

  PLs dont close the contest i am working...

  • 4 年 之前
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     竞赛主办者

     • 4 年 之前

     I notice you withdrew your entry.... I really liked the start you had. Do you plan to re-submit?

     • 4 年 之前
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     Hariiken

     • 4 年 之前

     Thanks. I will re-submit the designs. I will submit another design also. Pls dont mind if possible pls message me. Thanks

     • 4 年 之前
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  竞赛主办者

  • 4 年 之前

  Oh, and for everyone, it does not need to say giveaway. It might not always be free.

  • 4 年 之前
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     irfananis07

     • 4 年 之前

     Thanks for feedback i will submit my new entries asap
     
     Thanks

     • 4 年 之前
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  竞赛主办者

  • 4 年 之前

  This is a good start. It doesn't need to say "giveaway" as the piece itself is the gift. My audience is women aged 40-55, so it should be more elegant and less clunky. I don't understand the choice of photo, even though it's lovely. I would like to see images that are relevant to the topic, like empowerment, or journaling. I definitely want to use the picture of the orchid that was included in the uploads along with others that you choose. This sample doesn't let me see how you would handle the different parts of the document, how you would separate the sections, what photos you would choose, etc. You can get a little bit more insight about how I want my brand to look at my website, behappyfirst.org. Thanks so much!

  • 4 年 之前
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     irfananis07

     • 4 年 之前

     Please check my entries #3 #4 #5 & #6 Thanks

     • 4 年 之前
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  AngiePavlov

  • 4 年 之前

  Thank you for your feedback, I working on another one design.

  • 4 年 之前

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