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kess9316
A revolutionised store sales copy
I have taken your work and written it in stronger, more positive language. I have omitted any negativity, and put in some positive drawcard-words.
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竞赛主办者 - 4 年 之前
overall not bad though.
- 4 年 之前
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竞赛主办者 - 4 年 之前
"a good sense of homour" doesn't make sense and are there a deadlines.
- 4 年 之前
