Chicago, Art Thesis

Here is five chapters. *Thesis's NEW feedback here: Your thesis is a good improvement. It has good references and more interesting elaboration of your WYC case study. What it needs now is a structure for a thesis. You need mainly to re-organise the information you have. Please see the points below: 1, Please use the structure I have advised - breaking your thesis into chapters, with headings and sub-headings for each chapter if you can, to make it flow well. This is the structure: Introduction (essay submittted) -Introduction -Thesis statement -Literature Review (some of the main writers you will be quoting) -Methodology (in your case, teaching at WYC) -Road map for chapters Ch 1 – theoretical framework Ch 2 - arguments/artist reference Ch 3 – argument/artist reference/own work Conclusions -Revisit thesis statement and claim -Limitations of research/methodology -Further investigations for future (could be future research or teaching) If you follow the structure above, then you can see how to organise your materials. 2. The thesis is lacking visual images of your students' works and this is an important part of your thesis statement - to analyse their emotions through their art making. 3. Please follow chicago format - such as margins, page numbers, etc. Even your footnotes are not formattted properly (for eg, why are they indented). This website may be useful. [login to view URL] 4. Language style - can you watch this a bit. When you are quoting other writers, the language is quite different from when you are writing in your own words. So please make sure when you are quoting, it may be better to use quotes (ie "...") 5. Please keep at 6000 words. **Deadline on 8th april 2014. Submit on that time.