This is the copy we're starting with. Feel free to start from scratch.
"Note from creator: Why not squeeze every bit of fun out of time spent with family and friends. Why not fill every backyard bbq, birthday party, family reunion, and neighborhood block party with outdoor active games. Why not let grandma, dad, and daughter prove they’re the superior team. Why not soak up some rays, while building new family traditions, inside jokes, and bonds. Why not pass on age old games. Teaching and learning together can be some of the strongest memories to stick with us through out our lifetime. "
We are creating a family-centric outdoor active games brand called 4FUN and need a brief mission statement to tug at parents' heart strings a little. The block of text we've provided above is a bit too long and doesn't flow well. We're looking for something more between 2-3 sentences.
Buzz words or phrases: Makin' memories, family, fun, outdoor, etc.
See attached first for what this text will look like on top of the package, second for the package it is going on.
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