I need a writer to tell me what he/she thinks of my story

Hi, First of all: what area do you want to specialize in at film school? My nephew went to film school and they took classes in everything - including script writing. Secondly, they can't judge you on "content" since it's a vignette from your life (they can't judge your experiences). What they want to know if you can translate that experience (with words!) into something that connects with the reader on an emotional level. Tell me your word count (not character count) and if you just want feedback or if you want 1 or both of the stories edited. I don't know how much to bid otherwise. I'm a university-educated native English speaker. I have lots of experience - writing, editing, teaching creative writing & doing manuscript consultations. I've taken Robert McKee's STORY seminar (look him up - you should read his books). Please see my reviews and portfolio on my profile page. Thank you.

Hello, I am a native English speaker currently residing in Bosnia, editor and writer with a strong work ethic and great sense of responsibility towards my clients. I would love to provide you with valuable insight which would help you in submitting a successful application. I am aware that you need a compelling story first and foremost, and I would take care of the language aspects only after giving suggestions/making alterations to the substance of the text. I am both an editor and a writer, so I am able to analyze a story both for its structure, and the more important aspect – the overall conception, the effectiveness with which it communicates its message and the degree to which it succeeds to do so in a compelling manner. As stated on my profile page, I guarantee high-quality work and would be grateful for an opportunity to demonstrate my expertise. I am also able to offer you my services at a lower rate than the usual as I'm still new to this platform. I hope you will consider my proposal. Thank you for your time! Best regards, Sarah J.

Greetings, My proposal is in regards to writing an application My definitive objective is to address your needs, surpassing your desires! Come over chat I can share you my unique sample work and discuss the budget for this task. My skills: Creative Writing, Editorial Writing, Filmmaking, Research Writing, Proofreading Regards, Zohaab.

"Hello, EBooks are the way of the future. There is a leaning towards reading content on an EBook, because so many of us have smartphones and easy accessible technology to use in order to read our EBooks. The difference between writing for hard copy and writing for an eBook, is understanding technology and computers. I am a writer of books, both hard copy and EBooks. The same skill is needed for both. being I have experience in both. I love creating and informing the client the way in which to grow his or her business through this medium, including short novels for the EBook market. I am comfortable with uploading images, content and making the whole concept go live for the client once it has been approved. Regards"

Note: I will do your project in 30 USD. I have worked for my Australian, UK and European clients and they are happy with my work. Please check reviews. Hey Hope you are doing great :) I have read your detailed project description. I am a PhD qualified writer. I will surely assist you in reading your both the stories and will provide my genuine opinion. You can check my reviews. I will do your project in 30 USD and in return you can provide me with 5 stars and a positive review. Please check my reviews. My clients are happy with my work. I am familiar with APA, MLA, Harvard, Chicago and Turabian referencing styles. I have more than 5 years’ experience in technical and academic writing. Please message me to discuss further details. I will be glad to assist you out.

"Hello, I believe in the beauty of language and writing as a way to communicate that. Writing is a way of life for me; my interests span vocabulary, grammar, narrative and far beyond. New projects excite me and drive me toward creating a unique voice in collaboration with the desires of a client. Whether expanding business, creating exciting product descriptions or anything involved in the efficient communication of business values, I am highly experience and technically superior. Kind regards "

Hi There, I can give you an objective opinion and where possible I can help you construct a compelling emotive story. Yes, they are more interested in the emotions displayed then worrying about the fancy use of vocab. Thanks, Hemina

Hello, I am a University educated (native English speaking) Canadian with extensive experience in North America and Europe. My English test score is 98% and my expertise is in proofreading and editing application related documents. I would like to read both your documents and offer you feedback so you can decide on the most evocative one. I can also help to edit it if you like. I offer quality work that is not outsourced to others and can use the track changes feature for your convenience. Although I do not showcase my work to protect the confidentiality of my clients, I can provide samples of my work upon request. Some 5 Star reviews: 1) "Ena was a delight to work with... fast with communications and even faster with turning around a high quality editing task. Will use her again in the future." 2)“Great Job! Ena is a real professional. Everything went really quickly and seamlessly. Thank you!” 3) "Copy was delivered ahead of deadline, and was well written, with an understanding of our market. I would hire NewLightWorker again." I look forward to hearing from you. Kind Regards, Ena

Hello. I am a professional writer with experience of over ten years. I am well versed with skills on research, article writing, creative writing and proof reading among others. I wok around the clock to ensure that I deliver quality work on time. Looking forward to working with you.

Hello, i have read the details provided..please contact me to discuss more on the project deadline and some other few things

I can take a look at your story and provide great feedback on what needs to be approved upon.

Hi, Share the two stories you wrote with me and I will treat it professionally, helping you decide which to submit. I am an experienced creative writer with and easily accessible to clients. Looking forward to working with you. Regards, Ogbonna

Hi I am working as web content writing and articles for last 8 years. I am already writing web content I will provide you accurate work on time

Hello! My name is Sarah Conner. I am currently an English major with an Emphasis in Creative Writing. I have been writing since I was a small child and am very confident in the skills I can provide for you. I have been writing since I was five years old, both professionally and personally. Creative writing is one of my passions, I would be happy to help you look over and decide which story is best for your project. Being able to analyze a text and the meanings within is a very important skill that I have developed and refined throughout my years of reading and writing. I will be happy to send any examples of work that you would need. I look forward to hearing from you! Thank you, Sarah C

I consider that I am the best candidate, since writing is one of my skills. I can help you check if what you have written is good and has good content

Born and brought up in Jaipur, which falls into northern part of India, where Hindi is the native language, my mother tongue, & is widely used in each walk of life, hence provided me an excellent exposure & command over the language. At the same time my medium of instruction, while in school, college, university, and in most of my professional endeavors, was English, as it was widely used in corporate communication. This exposure gave an edge over English. Though, I was always fond of reading literature of almost every kind be it in English or Hindi, but got to start my career with Banking/Finance; worked there in various roles across levels for more than a decade, but my fascination for literature, reading & writing compelled me to change. Since last 5 years I am working as a freelancer doing Translations, Transcriptions, & writing. I have been writing articles on current topics in both the language & have even created user manuals for the Web/Mobile apps for my global clients.

i am an author and an editor. i wil be of great value reviewing your work

I'm happy to help you in this project. I love reading and editing and commenting on them. I'm ready to help you out.

Hello, I am a university professor, I have extensive experience in writing and formulating applications for scholarship applications and project financing. I have training in the management of emotions, multiple intelligences (emotional intelligence, intuitive, associative, rational, spiritual, visual, auditory, motivational), appreciative thinking among others. I can help you transmit the experience you want to tell.

Avid reader, and would love to check out your papers.

Great and exciting, but surely an important and responsible task. I would love to be a part of this journey. I am an avid reader and have myself been writing such socialistic real emotional contents since long. I think I could help you with this. Thanks.