Hi, everyone.
I need someone to read this text, look if something sounds weird (or not natural), and after this make a record.
The text is this one:
"Avantia manages real-time field work for you remotely in our control center.
Notifications are generated when the devices are triggered, optimizing the work of the video operator.
Automatic alerts trigger when employees are without safety equipment.
Video compression algorithms allow the activity to be monitored in real time through smartphones. The mobile app also lets you control the cameras.
Avantia's monitoring solution for field teams helps ensure employee safety and is a tool for remote team management."
All text must be recorded in 40 seconds.
Your voice will be used in this video: [login to view URL]
To pronounce the name Avantia correctly you should listen it before: [login to view URL]
Could you help me?
I will be glad to help you with your video script and voice over. I am an American male with a neutral accent. I am also an skilled writer and video maker. Please let me help you with your project.
Relevant Skills and Experience
I did a voice recording for standardized test recordings used by a major mining company. I have a Masters degree in language teaching, and my writing skills are well-developed.
Proposed Milestones
$50 USD - Completed Script and Voice Over
Additional Services Offered
$100 USD - Videography
I hope you will message me soon so we can get started! Cheers, -Eric S. PostMasterSM
I was raised by an English teacher, medalled in speaking courses throughout high-school and sound very 'official' all around.
Stay tuned, I'm still working on this proposal.