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1) It has gotten so bad at some stations instead of it has got so bad...
2) Whilst all these travelers are fretting about it will take and bag the head, (add comma), someone is sitting down mulling over the point of life.
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down and depressed, far from it - (add -) just...
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A haircut has been booked as the blond one want to have it coming down just above the shoulders.
Correction: *wants
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Ena