Academic Writing in Earth and Environmental Sciences

Hello, I need help to write a review on a review article about ocean biogeochemistry and global climate modelling. I am looking for someone to edit/rewrite my article. The rewritten article needs to be substantially different in terms of structure and word choice, but should convey the same information. The word count of the original article is about 950. However, the rewritten article can be longer than that. As a test, please rewrite the paragraph provided in the attachment (74 words). Bids without rewriting the sample paragraph will not be entertained. Thank you!