Targeting luxury clients means there is no room for mistakes. Misspellings and awkward sentence composition are an automatic turn-off - and make a potential customer wonder if the business itself is as sloppy as the site. That's part of your problem.
So how would I increase your ROI? FIrst off, we'd correct that deplorable typo in the nav bar. Then we'd completely rewrite the existing site copy, starting with more engaging heads, subheads and content that makes visitors realize that a spa retreat like this one is something they absolutely cannot miss. We'll play up the ABC Makeover affiliation and outline the steps for success that make this weight loss program the one that will truly work. We'll use relevant, engaging language that doesn't promise the moon and the stars, but clearly and succinctly describes what makes this program so special. We'll also compose several versions of heads, subs and body copy to find what engages visitors the most.
I have experience writing for luxury brands like Mandalay Bay Las Vegas and ABRAGG design, and my current SEO writing and A/B testing for a company that specializes in premium and exotic metal roofing materials means I can absolutely deliver on my promise. If you need to increase your ROI, I can help you do it. I can first drafts ready in under two weeks.