Follow up Sales Email Script Help

I am looking for someone who has familiarity with email marketing. I am looking to have this wrote up better to market my customers. This is used for after my inside sales rep speaks to a potential customer. I am not sure about the spacing, paragraph set up, or wording if it sounds good. Please help me by rewriting what is shown below, ______________________________________________________________________________________ Good afternoon (Prospect), My name is Christine, and I had spoken to (employee you spoke with) who said you would be interested in our Vegetable, Fruit, and Herb seeds. I know you are busy and your time is precious, so I’ll be brief. A little about us, Pure Pollination is a family based company that wholesales Vegetable, Fruit and Herb seeds. We pick the healthiest, fastest growing, NON-GMO Heirloom and Organic varieties. Unlike the competition that provide paper seed packs, Pure Pollination’s seed packs come in a super compact and waterproof, sealed Mylar bag which can be stored in a freezer to extend the lifespan of the seeds to well over 30 years before the germination rate is enough to be a concern in a survival situation. All of seeds are grown in the USA, are open-pollinated and can easily be grown to produce more seeds for sustainable living. In each of our packs there's enough seeds to plant an entire acre! All of our Pure Pollination seed packs consist of seed harvested for 2016 and are 99.9% pure with 93-98% germination rates depending on variety. If you are currently interested in purchasing the seed packets, we would like to send you a FREE sample of our seeds and brochure outlining our products. If you could reply and confirm your mailing address, I would be happy to get the free sample out to you as soon as possible! Should you have any questions in advance prior to receiving your FREE seed sample pack, please email ----- and I will be happy to assist you. You can also visit our website for more information at [login to view URL] Thank you for your time!