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Students are expected to exercise good judgment to advertise their events. Advertising may not be attached to walls or buildings in a way that will cause permanent damage. Outside chalk signs on sidewalks are permitted only in areas accessible to rainfall, so that university maintenance staff personnel do not need to wash off the writing. Writing on the sides of buildings and references to alcohol are not permitted. Check with the staff person who is responsible for posting notices in that building to determine individual posting policies.

Like this? Let me know if you need further changes At all times, it is expected from the students to advertise and exercise their events in good judgment. It is not allowed to attach advertising material walls or buildings in a way that will cause permanent damage. Chalk signs on sidewalks are permitted in outside areas only were accessible to rainfall. This will eliminate the necessity of university maintenance staff personnel to wash off the writing. It is not permitted to write on the sides of buildings or write references to alcohol. The responsible staff person of each building is responsible for posting notices in the respective building and must determine individual posting policies.

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I graduated in Modern Languages and I have 20 years of experience in the field. Just browsing your article, it not only needs some corrections on grammar, but also there are a couple of ideas that could be changed.

Hello, I am a Bulgarian teacher of English and my native language is Bulgarian. I graduated from Veliko Turnovo University in my country with major English Philology. I have more than 20 years of teaching experience. I am also an experienced translator of articles, papers and abstracts for conferences and symposiums. I have translated two volumes by a history professor from the local university. I propose the following revision: Students are always expected to exercise good judgement when advertising their events. Advertisements cannot be placed on walls or buildings in a way that will cause permanent damage. Chalk signs on sidewalks are only allowed in zones exposed to rainfall, thus eliminating the need for the maintenance personnel at the University to clean them. Advertisements on sides of buildings and those with references to alcohol are not permitted. Advertisements must be checked with the officer responsible for the posting of notices in each building as to determine the individual posting policies. Thank you for considering my application.

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